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The Writing Process

The five steps of the writing process, as taught in the Federal Way Public Schools, are:

Prewrite  |  Draft (triangle)  |  Revise (chili pepper)  |  Edit (wrench)  |  Publish.

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Key:

Triangle: The pupil works to organize ideas. (drafting)

Chili Pepper: The pupil rereads the piece, re-wording ideas to clarify meaning and "spice up" the writing. (revising)

Wrench: The pupil repairs faulty mechanics to make the piece error free. (editing)

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Process:  _Prewrite_  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Decide on a topic.

The writer will describe an arcade experience.

  • Decide how to organize ideas (use a graphic organizer).
  • Brainstorm ideas related to the topic.

The writer used his five senses to create the setting. He jotted down phrases about what saw, heard, and smelled at the arcade.

  • Choose the ideas that will most strongly support the topic.

The writer starred the ideas he planned to include in his narrative.

Process:

Prewrite  |  _Draft_  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Write the ideas in an organized way.  (paragraphs, bullets, or chart)

The writer chose a paragraph format.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  _Revise_  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Correct parts that don't make sense or aren't in logical order.
  • Re-word ideas or add details to fully develop, clarify, or enhance the topic.

The writer replaced "All around me I heard" with "I was surrounded by the sound of..." The writer replaced "in frustration" with "anxiously" to avoid using "frustration" twice.

  • Add powerful language, figurative language, detail, and description to engage the reader.

The writer added adjectives to create a vivid picture in the reader's mind.

  • Vary sentence beginnings and structure.
  • Strengthen voice to show the person behind the words.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  _Edit_  |  Publish

  • Correct mechanical errors.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  _Publish_

Produce a neat, error-free final copy.