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The Writing Process

The five steps of the writing process, as taught in the Federal Way Public Schools, are:

Prewrite  |  Draft (triangle)  |  Revise (chili pepper)  |  Edit (wrench)  |  Publish.

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Key:

Triangle: The pupil works to organize ideas. (drafting)

Chili Pepper: The pupil rereads the piece, re-wording ideas to clarify meaning and "spice up" the writing. (revising)

Wrench: The pupil repairs faulty mechanics to make the piece error free. (editing)

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Process:  _Prewrite_  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Decide on a topic.

Camp Site

  • Brainstorm ideas related to the topic.

The writer used her five senses in brainstorming ideas.

  • Use a graphic organizer to organize ideas.

The writer used a word map to organize her ideas.

  • Choose the ideas that will most strongly support the topic.

Process:

Prewrite  |  _Draft_  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Write your ideas in an organized way.  (paragraphs, bullets, or chart)

The writer wrote her ideas in paragraph form.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  _Revise_  |  Edit  |  Publish

  • Correct parts that don't make sense or aren't in logical order.
  • Add powerful language, figurative language, detail, description.

The writer added words that more clearly describe the idea.

  • Vary sentence beginnings and structure.

The writer varied sentence structure and beginnings.

  • Strengthen voice to show the person behind the words.

The writer lets us know how much she likes camping at this site.

  • Re-word ideas or add details to fully develop, clarify, or enhance the topic.

The writer added ideas to clarify and enhance the topic.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  _Edit_  |  Publish

  • Correct problems with mechanics.

The writer made corrections to make her piece error free.

Process:

Prewrite  |  Draft  |  Revise  |  Edit  |  _Publish_

  • Produce a neat, error-free final copy.

After editing and revising, the writer produced a neat and error-free final copy.